alternative draft letter - History Page - Marin Real Estate Bubble Wiki

	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Apr 3 2007, 12:28 AM EDT	marinite	make opposition clearly stated int he first sentence as most recipients won't read past the first sentance	edit	3 words added 3 words deleted
Change: concernsopposition overto currentlythe proposed legislation that would effectively result in a sweeping and carte blanc financial "bail-out" of homeowners defaulting on mortgage loans during the so-called "subprime meltdown" in the mortgage industry. While I appreciate that the intention of such View changes from previous version. (Word count: 682)
	Apr 2 2007, 12:00 AM EDT	jbowers		edit	1 word added 3 words deleted
Change: (cite a bill) that would effectively result in a sweeping and carte blanc financial "bail-out" of homeowners defaulting on mortgage loans during the so-called "subprime meltdown" in the mortgage industry. While I appreciate that the intention of such legislation is View changes from previous version. (Word count: 682)
	Apr 1 2007, 5:35 PM EDT	marinite	removed "I am an aspiring homeowner" because not everyone who sends the letter may be "aspiring homeowners"	edit	4 words deleted
Change: As an aspiring homeowner, I am appalled by the narrow and inequitable viewpoint embodied in current legislative proposals to address the issues associated with the problems in the mortgage industry. What is needed are proposals that treat all individuals equally View changes from previous version. (Word count: 684)
	Apr 1 2007, 2:47 PM EDT	jbowers		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: occuringoccurring unimpeded by government intervention that favors one constituency (those at risk of foreclosure) over another (aspiring homeowners). Make no mistake about it, a sweeping View changes from previous version. (Word count: 688)
	Apr 1 2007, 2:40 PM EDT	jbowers		edit	35 words added 18 words deleted
Change: not. I urge you to oppose the current proposals and to offer and support alternatives that are fair and equitable. I will be watching very closely to see how you are representing my interests as thein proposedthis legislationimportant progresses.matter. Sincerely,[Your Name][Your Address] View changes from previous version. (Word count: 688)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:19 PM EDT	jbowers		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: excericedexercised due diliguence in their responsibility to understand the terms of their mortgage simply underscores the need for better financial education, perhaps through FHA or other existing government programs. As an aspiring homeowner, I am appalled by the narrow View changes from previous version. (Word count: 670)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:14 PM EDT	jbowers		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: aat risk of foreclosure) over another (aspriing homeowners). Make no mistake about it, a sweeping “bail-out” of those currently at risk of foreclosure comes at View changes from previous version. (Word count: 670)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:12 PM EDT	jbowers		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: escalingescalating housing market of recent years as prices were driven to unsustainably high levels by the introduction of “novel” mortgage products and their euthusiastic adption View changes from previous version. (Word count: 670)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:09 PM EDT	jbowers		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 670)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:07 PM EDT	jbowers	this is just alternative (in tone and timber) that I'm throwing up for comment	edit	663 words added
Change: Now, as a result of the events of the last 3-4 years, we are witnessing a correction in the housing market. This is as it View changes from previous version. (Word count: 670)
	Apr 1 2007, 1:01 PM EDT	jbowers		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by jbowers Apr 1 2007, 1:01 PM EDT for: no reason given